Developmental Editing
I help fiction writers refine their stories from the inside out—so every plot line connects, every scene earns its place, and every emotional beat lands. My goal? To help you strengthen your story while preserving the voice and vision that make it yours.
I approach every manuscript with respect, curiosity, and a deep understanding of what makes stories work. My job isn’t to change your vision; it’s to help you bring it into focus.
A developmental edit should never crush your creative spirit. It should empower you to see your story clearly—to understand its potential, its heart, and the next steps needed to bring it fully to life.
Here’s what you get:
✨ Full-Manuscript Review
I dive deep into your story from start to finish—analyzing structure, pacing, character arcs, plot development, conflict, and emotional throughlines. I’ll add limited in-line notes as necessary.
📝 In-Depth Editorial Report
A multi-page report outlining:
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What’s working beautifully
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What’s not quite landing (and why)
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Clear, actionable suggestions to help your story shine
💬 Email Follow up
An opportunity for a follow up email (up to a week after receiving your edits) to ask any clarifying questions